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I met her on a sunny day, she was as lovely as
could be. She was quite attractive, but I was
attracted to her looks you see. Then I got to know
her and realized without a doubt, that she was as
attractive on the inside as she was on the out.

Her eyes were an electric blue, deep, mysterious,
and bold. As if they were windows to her soul,
shedding light on a story left untold. Her smile was
truely breathtaking, it could set an unhappy person
free. My heart had almost stopped when she decided
to smile at me.

Her personality was flawless, in every aspect of the
word. Every time she spoke to me, her words were
always heard. Then one day something was wrong,
she wasn't quite herself. It was as if she stored her
happieness away, up high on some long forgotten shelf.

I asked her what was wrong, she simply looked at me
and smiled. Her face then showed a sad expression,
like that of a lonely child. Her misery had shown itself,
it was so clear and plain. I would have rather killed
myself, than see her in further pain.

She was in the hospital the very next afternoon, I made
an appointment to visit her, I told her I'd be there soon.
I waited in her room and never left her side, even hours
after midnight, when silently she died.
©2006-2009 ~PlanetaryFox
:iconplanetaryfox:

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This one is kinda sad. I had started it quite a few days ago but I didn't finish it until last night.
Enjoy:)

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:iconmossi-mo:
oh dear, so sad, well written, flows a lovely story

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:iconplanetaryfox:
Thank you. I like your sig.:)

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Communication is everything.
Convey what you mean, for uninvited coyness leads to catastrophe.
:iconmossi-mo:
:giggle: i like urs too!
the one i wanted was too long so i switched :D

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:iconplanetaryfox:
Same here:( The one I wanted was Sooo cool. This is what it would have been: "Take my love, take my land, take me where I cannot stand. I don't care, I'm still free, you can't take the sky from me. Tie me up, beat me down, drag my body through the town, burn the land and boil the sea, you can't take the sky from me."

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Communication is everything.
Convey what you mean, for uninvited coyness leads to catastrophe.
:iconmossi-mo:
mine was
death is the release from all pain and complete cessation beyond which our suffering will not extend. It will return us to that condition of tranquility, which we had enjoyed before we were born. Should anyone mourn the deceased, then he must also mourn the unborn. Death is neithergood nor evil , for evil can only be something that actually exsists. However, whatever is of itself nothing and which transforms everything else into nothg will not at all be able to put us at the mercy of fate" - seneca
i was thinking about only the underlined but its not as powerfull as the whole

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:iconplanetaryfox:
Very cool:) Good point too:)

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Communication is everything.
Convey what you mean, for uninvited coyness leads to catastrophe.
:iconmossi-mo:
thankies

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:iconremiaru:
AMAZING. My favorite of yours so far. <3333

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Я хочу чтоб моя душа тоже пела; :rose:

:iconplanetaryfox:
Wow, something of mine is worth your favorites? Thank you:)
I'm sooooooo glad you liked it=D

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Communication is everything.
Convey what you mean, for uninvited coyness leads to catastrophe.
:iconstile13756:
BRAVO! i say man a great poet withen you a true love tale never befor have i read something that reminded me of my own work. i hope to see some more like this

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only on the day you can fool a fool is the day you are truely a fool

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